On my birthday 28 of December I ran down the stairs and open up my present and I find a key like a car key.My dad said "go out the back and I find a jeep that i can drive. But sadly it broke down.
My big suprise... was on my brithday when i got back from my dads and we went up to feed the ponies and i got a ... pony. It was a kimanua. It was the coolest pony ever
My big surprise was when I was at my dad's place and it was a fuo day's after my birthday I got a present I did not know what was in the box it was a surprise it was fun
when i was little me and my brother got a motorbike for christmas. we went on our farm in phoagin we went in our paddect and we were diving around then we put it in our shried and then we got a phone call...? that we had to take the motorbike in to town and give them to motorbike back i ask why they said that there were something roing with the motoer or something around it. so in the end my mum and dad got there money back and dad said we will get one for our brithday one year!!!!!!!!! then i said we better!!!!!!!!!:)
The time that I had a surprise was when I herd that we were going to splashplanet with all of my family and friends. But me and my sister were being so nutey that my dad said that we didn't get to go.The next morning my dad was packing my bag and then he said that we were going to.
last years christmas me and kimiora and my other sisters we got a really big surpries i was so exsteterd it was a trampalne iwas the best on it i can land a forwed flip and can neally to a back flip. I can do lots of tricks that a the cool as. that day iwas going to my nanas for christmas just to vist then i went to my uncile for tea we had pork and ledice and pumikin and subs andmash komer for tea it was so yummy
I was in my living room with my mum playing with my birthday present at about 1:30.Then the mailman drove up the drive so me and mum walked out side and the mailman gave me this big box then me and mum took it in side.then mum siad happy birthday Angus.
I though it was a bike but no it wasn't bike it was a romote controlr car set i siad thank you mum then i ring my dad up because he was with the rest of the family and the friends because i was stick and my mum brooke her leg and i played with it all day.
in Tapo on Cristmas day in a three story house there was a family, my family. You could hear the sound of presents being tore open . My brother opened his present (and you should of seen his face when he did) he got a ... NINTENDO DS LITE. When I saw what he got Ii was sure I was going to get some thing like a nintendo ds. I closed my eyes and opened my present it was a game boy advanced. the only problem was my mum said three of the games did not work but I tride them any way and guess what they all worked.
It was my birthday and my Mum said to me''you are staying at home for your birthday ''. Then it came 6.00 it was time to have a shower then my dad said ''have a shower and get into some good clothes ''. I got into some good clothes and we all got in the car and we started to travel to Palmeston North then i had to put something on my head.
MY WICKED NEW SCOOTER My dad my mum and i were putting the groceries away in the cupboards.Then my mum said to go and get a bag out of the boot and it was the scooter i have wanted for weeks i took it inside strait away and hugged mum and dad.We put it together strait away even my dad had a go i was so happy i was ridding it for one hole hour non stop.Then i rang Sam to tell him he all ready had one but he was still happy for me.The next day the wheel fell off and i didn't have any ellen keys so i had to wait till dad got home at 5:30pm.The next day the wheel was back on i scootered to school it was shinning in the morning sun shine like it was a golden egg.I took it to the skatepark that weekend everyone wanted a go of course i was not going to let them i'm not being meanit is three days old.
In 2009 on a friday at school my mum pulled Rebekka,Jessica and I out of our classes.We were in the car already and I asked my mum ''were are we going''and she said '' to the air port'' and I thought who is leaving or who is going somewhere.And just then my heart filled with shock like never before when my mum said that Rebekka and I was going to Christchurch.
it was christmas day.i ran to the christmas tree garbed all my gifts and put them into a pile.i picked the big one first then ripped into it.it was a wii .i was so surprised i ran to all my brother's rooms and woke them up they were surprised to.next i ran to my parent's room and woke them up and hugged them.then ran to the lounge opened the wii box plugged it in then went to plug it into the t.v ... the t.v didn't have the right inputs to plug it in i was so angry that i sat down and watched everyone open there gifts then i watched my mum and dad open there big one.IT WAS A NEW T.V. i was so happy i plugged the new t.v in straightaway and played wii all day.
When I woke up my heart jumped with excitement because my hole family where in my room at my mum's house in Palmerston North and they sang Happy birthday to me and then they gave me my present.... it was a pear of black pant's and a cool as firey flamey t-shirt and I put it on and ran around wearing it and then I sliped and slided in mud and I fell in a dirty puddle and my mum growled at me? by Max
It was the 19th of october 2009, my birthday.I was lying in my bed waiting until 7.00am wondering about what I would get for my birthday... I lept out of bed and there in the shadows was NOTHING!?No presents!my heart sank like a stone.I ran into mum's bedroom"mum" I whispered as not to wake up dad "why didn't I get any presents".Mum told me to look outside... With that I sped outside and there it was gleaming in the morning light a brand new 18 gear Raliegh bike!! I got such a surprise! callum was soo jealous that he had to have a go on it.I was so happy,we took it inside to get a better look at it.I found out that you can only change gears when you are pedaling and when you change gear without pedaling it ruins the chain
One sunny christmas day at my dad's flat me and my brother decided to open our shiny red presents from under the christmas tree our dad had gave us. Ciaran opened his presents in a flash while i took my time. Ciaran and i got a cap and a funny looking money bank each. Ciaran got some other cool stuff when i thought i had nothing else. just then my dad slowly and quietly walked in out of the other room with a small box that he had hid in his bedroom. He gave it to me and told me to open it so i opened it quickly. When i saw what it was i was speechless i felt so happy it was a shiny pink phone. My dad put his number on it and text me do you like your present and i said yes.Now i'm texting away every day. A couple of weeks later me my dad and Ciaran went to the BMX thing at the square in Palmerston North. When we got there we went to the loo before it started. They was a long line. My phone rang my dad was holding it when it rang so Ciaran came and gave it to me. It finished ringing so i put it in my pocket why i went toilet. Before i knew it i heard a big splash. I looked in the toilet and saw my phone i had to get it YUCK! I rushed out NOOOOOOOO it was broken. We went home after that know one could fix my phone. A few months later i bought a new phone and luckily i still have it im so glad i got a new one.;)
One Christmas morning I woke up and slowly got out of my bed, opened the curtains, looked out the window and OH how frosty the paddocks were. So I walked down the hall hoping that it would be warmer in the lounge. So I opened the door and my little brother, my mum and my step mum all shouted out to me MERRY CHRISTMAS!! I said "thank you" and in the middle of the room was a was a big pile of presents stacked there waiting for me. When I had opened them all Mum gave me one more it was 2 d.s games and I said " thanks mum but how am I suppose to play d.s games with out a d.s? "OH I don't know" and she handed me one more present and I opened it and there was a shiny new D.S! Thank you so much mum I said as I gave every one a hug.
On my birthday 28 of December I ran down the stairs and open up my present and I find a key like a car key.My dad said "go out the back and I find a jeep that i can drive. But sadly it broke down.
ReplyDeleteMy big suprise... was on my brithday when i got back from my dads and we went up to feed the ponies and i got a ... pony. It was a kimanua. It was the coolest pony ever
ReplyDeleteMy big surprise was when I was at my dad's place and it was a fuo day's after my birthday I got a present I did not know what was in the box it was a surprise it was fun
ReplyDeletewhen i was little me and my brother got a motorbike for christmas. we went on our farm in phoagin we went in our paddect and we were diving around then we put it in our shried and then we got a phone call...? that we had to take the motorbike in to town and give them to motorbike back i ask why they said that there were something roing with the motoer or something around it. so in the end my mum and dad got there money back and dad said we will get one for our brithday one year!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethen i said we better!!!!!!!!!:)
The time that I had a surprise was when I herd that we were going to splashplanet with all of my family and friends. But me and my sister were being so nutey that my dad said that we didn't get to go.The next morning my dad was packing my bag and then he said that we were going to.
ReplyDeletelast years christmas me and kimiora and my other sisters we got a really big surpries i was so exsteterd it was a trampalne iwas the best on it i can land a forwed flip and can neally to a back flip. I can do lots of tricks that a the cool as. that day iwas going to my nanas for christmas just to vist then i went to my uncile for tea we had pork and ledice and pumikin and subs andmash komer for tea it was so yummy
ReplyDeleteI wos in the shop buying bread and milk for mum and i gave the money but I didn't have a enough
ReplyDeleteI was in my living room with my mum playing with my birthday present at about 1:30.Then the mailman drove up the drive so me and mum walked out side and the mailman gave me this big box then me and mum took it in side.then mum siad happy birthday Angus.
ReplyDeleteI though it was a bike but no it wasn't bike it was a romote controlr car set i siad thank you mum then i ring my dad up because he was with the rest of the family and the friends because i was stick and my mum brooke her leg and i played with it all day.
By Angus Beck
in Tapo on Cristmas day in a three story house there was a family, my family. You could hear the sound of presents being tore open . My brother opened his present (and you should of seen his face when he did) he got a ... NINTENDO DS LITE. When I saw what he got Ii was sure I was going to get some thing like a nintendo ds. I closed my eyes and opened my present it was a game boy advanced. the only problem was my mum said three of the games did not work but I tride them any way and guess what they all worked.
ReplyDeleteIt was my birthday and my Mum said to me''you are staying at home for your birthday ''. Then it came 6.00 it was time to have a shower then my dad said ''have a shower and get into some good clothes ''. I got into some good clothes and we all got in the car and we started to travel to Palmeston North then i had to put something on my head.
ReplyDeletegre4at lochann that is surprising to here you did have analf money;)
ReplyDeletecool lochlann.nice seting the scene and problem.i like it
ReplyDeleteMY WICKED NEW SCOOTER
ReplyDeleteMy dad my mum and i were putting the groceries away in the cupboards.Then my mum said to go and get a bag out of the boot and it was the scooter i have wanted for weeks i took it inside strait away and hugged mum and dad.We put it together strait away even my dad had a go i was so happy i was ridding it for one hole hour non stop.Then i rang Sam to tell him he all ready had one but he was still happy for me.The next day the wheel fell off and i didn't have any ellen keys so i had to wait till dad got home at 5:30pm.The next day the wheel was back on i scootered to school it was shinning in the morning sun shine like it was a golden egg.I took it to the skatepark that weekend everyone wanted a go of course i was not going to let them i'm not being meanit is three days old.
It was at christmas we where in the lounge me,mum
ReplyDeleteall my sisters and gorge. gorge is my step dad.
In 2009 on a friday at school my mum pulled Rebekka,Jessica and I out of our classes.We were in the car already and I asked my mum ''were are we going''and she said '' to the air port'' and I thought who is leaving or who is going somewhere.And just then my heart filled with shock like never before when my mum said that Rebekka and I was going to Christchurch.
ReplyDeleteit was christmas day.i ran to the christmas tree garbed all my gifts and put them into a pile.i picked the big one first then ripped into it.it was a wii .i was so surprised i ran to all my brother's rooms and woke them up they were surprised to.next i ran to my parent's room and woke them up and hugged them.then ran to the lounge opened the wii box plugged it in then went to plug it into the t.v ...
ReplyDeletethe t.v didn't have the right inputs to plug it in i was so angry that i sat down and watched everyone open there gifts then i watched my mum and dad open there big one.IT WAS A NEW T.V. i was so happy i plugged the new t.v in straightaway and played wii all day.
When I woke up my heart jumped with excitement because my hole family where in my room at my mum's house in Palmerston North and they sang Happy birthday to me and then they gave me my present.... it was a pear of black pant's and a cool as firey flamey t-shirt and I put it on and ran around wearing it and then I sliped and slided in mud and I fell in a dirty puddle and my mum growled at me? by Max
ReplyDeleteIt was the 19th of october 2009, my birthday.I was lying in my bed waiting until 7.00am wondering about what I would get for my birthday...
ReplyDeleteI lept out of bed and there in the shadows was NOTHING!?No presents!my heart sank like a stone.I ran into mum's bedroom"mum" I whispered as not to wake up dad "why didn't I get any presents".Mum told me to look outside...
With that I sped outside and there it was gleaming in the morning light a brand new 18 gear Raliegh bike!! I got such a surprise! callum was soo jealous that he had to have a go on it.I was so happy,we took it inside to get a better look at it.I found out that you can only change gears when you are pedaling and when you change gear without pedaling it ruins the chain
One sunny christmas day at my dad's flat me and my brother decided to open our shiny red presents from under the christmas tree our dad had gave us. Ciaran opened his presents in a flash while i took my time. Ciaran and i got a cap and a funny looking money bank each. Ciaran got some other cool stuff when i thought i had nothing else. just then my dad slowly and quietly walked in out of the other room with a small box that he had hid in his bedroom. He gave it to me and told me to open it so i opened it quickly. When i saw what it was i was speechless i felt so happy it was a shiny pink phone. My dad put his number on it and text me do you like your present and i said yes.Now i'm texting away every day. A couple of weeks later me my dad and Ciaran went to the BMX thing at the square in Palmerston North. When we got there we went to the loo before it started. They was a long line. My phone rang my dad was holding it when it rang so Ciaran came and gave it to me. It finished ringing so i put it in my pocket why i went toilet. Before i knew it i heard a big splash. I looked in the toilet and saw my phone i had to get it YUCK! I rushed out NOOOOOOOO it was broken. We went home after that know one could fix my phone. A few months later i bought a new phone and luckily i still have it im so glad i got a new one.;)
ReplyDeleteOne Christmas morning I woke up and slowly got out of my bed, opened the curtains, looked out the window and OH how frosty the paddocks were. So I walked down the hall hoping that it would be warmer in the lounge. So I opened the door and my little brother, my mum and my step mum all shouted out to me MERRY CHRISTMAS!! I said "thank you" and in the middle of the room was a was a big pile of presents stacked there waiting for me. When I had opened them all Mum gave me one more it was 2 d.s games and I said " thanks mum but how am I suppose to play d.s games with out a d.s? "OH I don't know" and she handed me one more present and I opened it and there was a shiny new D.S! Thank you so much mum I said as I gave every one a hug.
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ReplyDeleteWOW what great writing Room 7! Well done to those of you who have set the scene. Keep impressing your teacher!
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